tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3965985900753420510.post378830317917030912..comments2023-05-17T05:44:07.423-07:00Comments on A Writing To Learn Blog: Logos Shoe Commercial ELoMike Lohrehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05832313501793243606noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3965985900753420510.post-82346120453287730342011-12-15T20:28:07.433-08:002011-12-15T20:28:07.433-08:00how do i know what my final grade is after the ext...how do i know what my final grade is after the extra credit. I received my grade in the mail today, was at an 80%...E.Lohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11367686044314959024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3965985900753420510.post-63878024893725537122011-12-05T14:22:43.906-08:002011-12-05T14:22:43.906-08:00Eric, I like how you let us see the shoes in compa...Eric, I like how you let us see the shoes in comparison and contrast. You could have done more to talk about materials used, durability statistics, etc. to give even more logos to the appeal, but good job overall! 30 seconds goes fast, doesn't it? That's why the copy has to be so purposeful!Mike Lohrehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05832313501793243606noreply@blogger.com